God, it's beautiful.
God, it's beautiful.
Animation is pretty good, kinda weird at parts, main fall down is the writing though. You should definitely have other people look through your scripts before you make 'em into a full animation, because it's really hurting the general flow of everything.
Cool, thanks for the feedback, but I wouldnt be taking someone seriously when what they say doesnt match with what they can actually do https://www.newgrounds.com/portal/view/710299
why you little
The animation is pretty solid stuff and voice acting is decent, but the writing definitely fell a bit short for me, and that's what brought the whole thing down in my opinion.
Great stuff, I'll just start with the criticism first to get it outta the way. Firstly, I noticed that the character's expressions could've been a little more emotive, and a lot of the line art of the characters were very rigid, take for example the part where the boy points the gun at the other guy, the barrel of the gun is more of a hexagonal shape than a circular shape.
Overall it's pretty decently animated, sound effects are pretty solid in the whole thing, just in general a really nice smooth animation.
Thank you very much, I will keep it in mind to improve in future animations
Greetings :D
DAMN that's nice
this makes me sad
good job
I'll be totally honest with you mate, if this is just a hobby to you then more power to you but you really can't blame people for brushing this sort of stuff aside. Whether you like it or not, it's blatant tracing, and it doesn't matter how many fancy terms you try to throw in front of it, it's still tracing to a tee.
I guess it really depends on whether you just like doing this because it's fun for you or if you actually want to grow as an artist, because this is definitely not the way to do it. And if you're just doing this sort of stuff to please yourself, then maybe you should just keep this sort of stuff to yourself, and show anyone that you think might want to see them. You can't really defend this as art though.
I found this like a year ago and I keep coming back to it. This is truly a timeless classic.
That was really well animated, well done mate!
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